Tuesday, December 20, 2011
Premiership race
Monday, December 19, 2011
12 dancing princesses
[117 * 2 = 134 words]
Remember that, if the number of words in your podcast script is 125 or lower, you should multiply by 2 to get the nominal word count.
Book review script
The twelve princesses in this story like to have fun. When their father finds out they've been sneaking off at night to go dancing, he's furious. But can he stop them?Every night, the King locked the tower door, so that the princesses couldn't sneak out. One day, the maid went to the princesses' room, and she noticed their shoes were lying in a wet pile on the floor. The shoes were worn out. When the king heard about the shoes, he was very angry. Then he had an idea. He decided that the first man to discover where his daughters went each night could marry them. Who can find the princesses' secret?
(117 words)
A sample book review
Princesses are supposed to be quiet and well behaved, but the twelve princesses in this story like to have fun. When their father finds out they've been sneaking off at night to go dancing, he's furious. "Dancing is banned!" he declares. But will that stop them?This story is about the twelve princesses' dancing. Their father, the king, was a grumpy old man who didn't believe in having fun. He believed that princesses should be seen and not heard. The princesses strongly disagreed. Their father hated dancing, but the princesses loved it, so whenever he wasn't looking, they danced anyway. The girls slept in a tall tower with their beds side by side. Every night, the king locked the tower door, so that they couldn't sneak out. One day, the maid went to the princesses' room, and she noticed their shoes were lying in a soggy pile on the floor. The shoes were worn out. When the king heard about the shoes, he was furious. Then he had a brilliant idea. He decided that the first man to discover where his daughters went each night could marry of them. Posters went up across the land. Who can find the princesses' secret?
(205 words)
The process of writing and recording a book review
- Read a book!
- Write a book review and post it to your blog (Use the Books or Book reviews tag.)
- Edit your book review to make a shorter version (preferably fewer than 100 words). Post it on your blog with the Scripts tag.)
- Practice reading the shorter version aloud. Key points are volume, going down and then pausing at periods, and differentiating content from function words.
- Record your short book review, using the Audioboo app.
- Upload to Audioboo, find the recording on Audioboo, and embed it into your blog. Use the tag My podcast. If the number of words in your podcast episode is 125 or fewer, multiply by 2 to get the official word count for the post.
- Listen to the recording! Make sure that your volume and intonation are OK.
205
132
234
TOTAL: 571 words for 1 book review with recording
Remaining Writing 4 classes
The next two classes are on January 16th and 17th, and those will be the final classes of the semester. Much of that time will be spent on movie review essay corrections, so I recommend that you try to finish off your 12 book reviews before the winter holiday.
Note that the minimum number of recordings this semester is 3, but I recommend that you do more than that, because reading aloud and recording book reviews improves your intonation and pronunciation. Also, remember that the official word count for a recorded book review is double the number of words actually in the script.
At the bottom of the post with your recording, use this format for the word count. (Imagine that your script has 90 words.)
[90 * 2 = 180 words]
Club World Cup
In the event, both players looked really good, but Barcelona had around 73% of the possession, so Neymar had few chances on the ball. Barcelona were much stronger as a team, passing the ball around quickly and not giving the Santos players many opportunities to attack. Messi was on top form, making several long dribbles past 3 or 4 Santos players and scoring 2 goals. Xavi and Cesc Fabregas also scored a goal each, for a final score of 4–0.
December 19th & 20th
Sunday, December 18, 2011
About your movie essays
If you still haven't watched the movies, please make arrangements to do so as soon as possible. Also, make sure that you have been writing lots of Essay prep posts, based on the sites that we have looked at related to these movies. Be sure to use those Essay prep posts effectively to help you write your essay.
Many students will have already noticed that Essay prep posts give you the chance to use some of the same words twice on your blog. In addition, everyone should post each essay twice (1st and final drafts).
How to submit your essays: Send each essay as a Word, Pages, or RTF attachment to your teacher's email address.
Schedule
- January 11th: Deadline for submission of both essays (1st drafts). After submitting, paste the text into a new blog post. Use the tags Essays and Movies.
- January 16th or 17th: A chance to ask questions about corrections and make revisions.
- January 20th: Deadline for 2nd (final)* drafts
- January 23rd: Deadline for final drafts (for students whose 2nd draft was not acceptable).
- January 30th: Final exam
Monday, December 12, 2011
This week in football
The first result means that Barcelona still have a realistic chance of catching Real Madrid in the championship race.
Monday, December 5, 2011
Soccer again
Go
Monday, November 28, 2011
Lucky Number
Milne, J. (2005). Lucky number. Oxford: Macmillan Heinemann ELT.
Recent and upcoming movies
The best one I have seen was Fair Game. This movie is a true story, about a CIA agent called Valerie Plame whose identity is revealed by the government and who thus loses her livelihood. The actors are Naomi Watts and Sean Penn, and they're really good. This film is very moving.
Another movie was The Three Musketeers. This was quite entertaining, but rather superficial and not very memorable.
Macmillan Readers
The first one was Anna and the Fighter. This is about a girl who travels on a train by herself for the first time to visit her aunt. Unfortunately, she falls asleep and goes past her stop, and she doesn't have any money to ride in the train again to her destination. And a big man with a scar is in the carriage with her and she's afraid.
The other one is The Lost Ship. This is about a captain of a ship who finds another ship with no crew. He goes aboard to see what is happening, and finds himself trapped.
Laird, E. (2005). Anna and the fighter. Oxford: Macmillan Heinemann ELT.
Colbourn, S. (2005). The lost ship. Oxford: Macmillan Heinemann ELT.
New York Review of Books… and football!
The writing in the NYRB is very good, and often they feature long essays on 5 or 6 books on the same topic, so it is possible to find out about a lot of books from one essay.
In the Premier League, Manchester United and Manchester City both drew at the weekend. It's been a long time since neither of them won. Arsenal, Liverpool, and Newcastle also drew, while Tottenham and Chelsea won. Tottenham are now in 3rd or 4th place.
Monday, November 21, 2011
The two main characters in Amadeus
Salieri was important in the development of Italian opera. He was the director of the Italian opera in Vienna. Some of his famous students were Beethoven, Liszt, and Franz Schubert.
Salieri is played by F. Murray Abraham and Mozart is played by Tom Hulce.
Amadeus links
Premier League in late November
Actors (and other personnel) in Midnight Run
Robert De Niro is considered to be one of the greatest movie actors. He was born in 1943 and has had a long career. He became famous with the movie Mean Streets. Midnight Run is considered to be one of his best performances because of his good chemistry with Charles Grodin.
Charles Grodin was born in 1935. He is probably best known for the Beethoven dog movies. In Midnight Run, he is credited with making it easy for Robert De Niro to give a great comic performance.
5 movies I like
- Midnight Run (great scenes)
- Donnie Brasco (trailer)
- Heat (restaurant scene)
- Magnolia
- Carlito's Way (final scene in Italian)
Premier League again
Monday, November 14, 2011
SiL on Wikipedia
Shakespeare in Love is a 1998 film written by Tom Stoppard. It was hugely popular and won 7 Academy Awards, including Best Picture, Best Actress, and Best Supporting Actress. It contains many references to Shakespeare plays, featuring several paraphrases from Romeo & Juliet and Hamlet, as well as references to Twelfth Night.
The movie includes several real people, including William Shakespeare himself, Christopher Marlowe, and Queen Elizabeth I.
The cast is very good, and includes Joseph Fiennes, Gwyneth Paltrow, Geoffrey Rush, and Judi Dench.
England versus Sweden
According to the Guardian, the England team will feature a few new players: Bobby Zamora, Kyle Walker, and Daniel Sturridge. It will be interesting to see how England do with these new players. It is interesting to note that England have not beaten Sweden since 1968, so, despite their lower world ranking, this is unlikely to be an easy game.
Much Ado on Wikipedia
- Leonato is the governor of Messina, part of Sicily
- Don Pedro is the Duke of Aragon
- Claudio is a Count and a companion of Don Pedro, and he falls in love with…
- Hero, who is Leonato's only daughter
It is thought that the play was written in about 1598.
Much Ado Trailer
Sigh no more, ladies, sigh no more
Men were deceivers ever
One foot in sea
And one on shore
To one thing constant never
Then sigh not so
But let them go
And be you blithe and bonny
Converting all your tales of woe
Into hey nonny nonny
My impression after watching the trailer is that it's a joyous movie. I'm looking forward to watching it (again).
Go, England!
Apparently, this time was similar in the first half: Spain had possession for most of the time, and England wasn't able to mount any good attacks. Luckily, though, Spain wasn't able to convert their possession into a goal, and England scored a goal with a quick attack, winning 1–0.
Monday, November 7, 2011
More on the Premier League
Jane Eyre
Premier League early November
(84 words)
Wednesday, November 2, 2011
Book Reviews
How to do a book review on the IS4 blog
a good book review
Monday, October 24, 2011
Premier League again again
Premier League re-revisited again
"That's a really good question, and I'm glad you asked." "I am asking." "And well you may."
Session 4: October 24th, 2011
- Join Audioboo. I'll give you detailed instructions separately.
- Make a "reverse outline" from your movie essay.
- Create a short script from the reverse outline and print it out. Your aim should be to speak quite quickly for about 1 minute.
- Record your script on Audioboo.
- Create a new post on your blog. Tags should be "my podcast" and "movies". The text content should be the reverse outline you made in (2). You need to link to the recording you made in (4).
- After you've finished, create another post with your script from (3). Tag this "movies" and "scripts".
UPDATE: Because of time problems, we will do the reverse outline and the recording for the movie essay next time. In this class, you should record a quick introduction and one of your book reviews from this semester. (Please count the number of words that you recorded, just as with a standard written post.)
HOMEWORK: We are now a third of the way through the semester. I am worried about people falling behind. There is no class next week. Before the next class (in November), please:
- Make sure you have written 4 or 5 book reviews for this semester;
- Updated your Booklog collection;
- Finished and posted your essay movie;
- Posted a Blog Stats post with your up-to-date number of words for this semester.
Monday, October 17, 2011
Autumn films
Of those movies, Fair Game and Moneyball are both based on true stories. Fair Game is about Valerie Plame, a CIA operative whose identity is exposed by the Bush administration as retaliation for a newspaper article written by her husband. Moneyball, starring Brad Pitt, is about a baseball team that doesn't have much money but manages to win a championship.
Premier League revisited again
This year, Manchester United rested many players, including Rooney, who had taken part in the international matches or whom they want to include in next week's match against Manchester City. Apparently, the match was very dull until Gerard, returning from injury, scored. But, as happens very often, Manchester United came back to a draw with a late goal, after sending Rooney on as a substitute.
Manchester United's draw combined with Manchester City's win over Aston Villa to send Manchester City top for the first time. My suspicion is that Ferguson, the Manchester United manager, will be the most satisfied of the managers, because most of his top players have had a good rest, and I think he will be confident of beating Manchester City and going top again.
In a battle between two clubs lower down the table, Arsenal beat Sunderland 2-1. Yeah!
Monday, October 3, 2011
Movies to watch this semester (C class)
- Shakespeare in Love (available in Tsutaya, etc., and in the KGU Library)
- Amadeus (available in Tsutaya, etc., and in the KGU Library)
Premier League again
- Manchester United
- Chelsea
- Manchester City
Movies to watch this semester (A class)
- Midnight Run
Premier League
All three of the top 3 teams qualify automatically for next season's Champions League, which means that they get extra income and have a better chance of continuing to improve their team.
On today's menu: October 3rd, 2011 (Session 2)
- Juppun ha Juubun
- Talking about the syllabus
- Essay 1
Sunday, October 2, 2011
Writing 4: October 3rd 2011
- the story (but don't tell us the ending!)
- why it was interesting to you
- the actors
- the director
- the English and Japanese titles: is there anything interesting about the translation of the title?
- any famous lines or speeches from the movie
- any other similar movies
The deadline for the essay is October 16th (before the next Writing class on October 17th).
Monday, September 26, 2011
The Double
It's Cassius. He's back.
Cassius is dead...This is not his work - Then prove it.
This is not his work.
Blog stats September 26th
My holiday 1
94/285 words
Movies in autumn/winter
I also watched the trailer for Abduction. This is about a young man who lives an ordinary life but then he is told that his life has been a lie.
It's Cassius. He's back.
Cassius is dead.
He's dead.
This is not his work.
We'd like the two of you to work together.
Abduction
What if you discovered your entire life was a lie?
You're going to kill each other.
There are only 4 of us. Two of us are dead.
There's a leak.
Whoever these people are, I have to stop them.
I want confirmation.
Listen to me, Nathan. We're going to find you. - Not if I find you first!
Abduction. In theaters September 23rd.
Welcome to Writing 4
Thursday, July 21, 2011
Women's Soccer
Podcast tips
Exam
- Your final declaration for word count, post count, and so on;
- An original short essay.
- 1 is the most important part. In order to do it quickly, you should prepare a Blog Stats post the day before the exam. Then you can copy the figures from that post onto the exam paper.
- The essay question will be a new one, but it will be similar in some ways with the essays you have done this semester. Watch out especially for simple errors such as santangen no S, and matching singular and plural. Also remember that, in general, a singular noun has an article!
- You can use the Internet to look up information for the essay. But don't spend too long collecting information. Get a few bits of interesting and relevant information, and spend most of your time writing and checking your writing.
Women's Soccer, and other matters
In the English Premier League, Liverpool have been spending big in the transfer market, while Arsenal look like they are going to lose more than they gain.
Monday, July 11, 2011
Red Gyuu
APA reference practice
Mason, C. (2008). Macbeth. Usborne.
Aka ushi
Sunday, July 10, 2011
Class of July 11th, 2011
- Juppun ha Juubun
- Second-semester typing (notice from Mr Tomei)
- A note on blog tags (labels)
- Revision of APA reference format
- Creating and recording your 2nd podcast episode
- Blog stats ( Post before class of June 21st.)
The number of book reviews for this semester is 12.
The exam is on August 1st.
You can start second-semester blogging on September 1st.
Monday, July 4, 2011
Baskin Robbins
Monday, June 20, 2011
Under-21 Football
The result was 3–1 to Japan. It was a good result, though Japan was a little disappointed to concede a goal, especially after looking so much better than Kuwait throughout the match. Ohsako (from Kashima Antlers) played pretty well. I think the away leg will be held on Thursday in Kuwait, and I hope it will be televised too.
Father's Day
Monday, June 13, 2011
Wizard of Oz
Black Swan
The movie was interesting, especially the performance of Mila Kunis as Lily, another dancer in the ballet company. Unfortunately, I didn't think the performances of Vincent Cassel and Natalie Portman were particularly good. But the movie is pretty interesting and well worth seeing.
Premier League
As happens every season, some managers have been sacked, and others have quit their jobs. Fulham manager Mark Hughes resigned last week, and Fulham announced just a few days later that they had hired Martin Jol, a former Spurs and Ajax manager, to take over. Aston Villa's Gerard Houllier, who was hospitalized for heart problems during the season, left his post, and Aston Villa are still looking for a replacement. Wigan's Roberto Martinez was invited to take over the job, but he chose to remain with Wigan. The biggest vacancy is at Chelsea, where Carlo Ancelotti was fired after coming second in the league and being knocked out in the quarter-finals of the Champions League.
Monday, June 6, 2011
Soccer, continued
Another recent match was England against Switzerland. England conceded 2 early goals but came back to draw.
The Wizard of Oz
Dorothy walked briskly along the yellow road, her silver shoes tinkling on the bricks.
In the first episode of my podcast, I introduce the wonderful story, The Wizard of Oz.
Soccer
The final two years before had featured the same two teams, and in that match Barcelona won. Many people said that Manchester United's tactics had been at fault, so everyone was looking forward to seeing Manchester's tactical plan this time.
For the first ten minutes, Manchester looked impressive, but after that Barcelona dominated possession, and my impression was that Barcelona had improved a lot since two years ago, while Manchester had failed to learn any tactical lessons. The match ended 3-1 to Barcelona.
In Japan, the Kirin Cup is taking place now. Japan's first match against Peru was not a good one, but it will be intereresting to see how they play against the Czech Republic tomorrow.
Monday, May 23, 2011
WWTC 2011 continued
Although I like Ma Lin, he is getting old, and I think Ma Long would be a much stronger competitor next year.
WTTC 2011
Ma Lin lost in the quarterfinals.
Monday, May 16, 2011
Takamori
On the way to the "power spot", we stopped at a strawberry picking place. They had 4 kinds of strawberries, and we each ate about 40 to 60 strawberries. On the way back, we played tennis in a park, so it was a very full day!
Work for week of May 16-May 22
- Please include links
- Please include pictures
- Please write 4 or 5 paragraphs. Remember NOT to put line returns within paragraphs.
WTTC: new world champion
The match was a contrast of styles. Wang Hao plays penhand style, and his powerful backhand distinguishes him from most penhold players, while Zhang Jike plays with a shakehand grip. Wang Hao is 27, and, unless Zhang Jike has an injury, it's difficult to imagine Zhang not taking the world number 1 ranking away from him.
Monday, May 9, 2011
Kenta Matsudaira
He hasn't really done anything terribly exciting since then, but that performance was enough to launch him into the twenties and thirties in the world rankings, from the fifties and sixties though most of the previous year.
Mashiki Culture Center
Prefectural Theater
Nishinokubo Park
Ai Fukuhara
That ranking is a bit of a surprise, because in Japan she generally loses out to Ishikawa (number 10) and Sayaka Hirano (number 11), and as far as I know she has never won the national championships in Japan.
Monday, May 2, 2011
Shrek the Third: A Good King is Hard to Find
"You'll love being king," Shrek tells Artie…"Poison? Bodyguards? Stop the boat!" yells Artie.
This is one of the books written to support the release of the movie Shrek the Third. It's a good way to familiarize yourself with the characters after or before watching the movie.Hapka, C. (2007). Shrek the Third: A good king is hard to find. New York: HarperCollins.
Series: ICR2
Vocabulary: mayor 市長、町長
Champions League
Manchester United's semi-final opponent is Schalke from Germany, while Barcelona's is Real Madrid. The final will be played in Real Madrid's stadium called the Bernabeu, so Real Madrid would badly like to come back in the second leg and appear in the final.
BR1-04: Spider-Man 3: Meet the Heroes & Villains

I sometimes change from Peter Parker into someone else…Spider-Man.
This book is part of the set of books written to support the release of the Spider-Man 3 movie. To tell you the truth, the book itself isn't particularly interesting, but I think it's useful to read before watching the movie, because it introduces the characters in the movie, including Peter Parker, his boss, his girlfriend (played by Kirsten Dunst!), and the villains, including the New Goblin, Sandman, and Venom. You can read about some of those villains individually in other books in the series. If you haven't seen the movies, I recommend them highly, because, in addition to interesting action, the relationships in the movie are very interesting.
Premier League revisited
Monday, April 25, 2011
Premier League
I was away over the weekend, so I was disappointed this morning when I checked the website to find that Arsenal had lost their match with Bolton Wanderers (the team where Jun'ichi Inamoto played in 2001-2). Arsenal were top of the table until the New Year, but now they have fallen to third, after drawing most of their recent matches. Now they're fighting to stay in 3rd place. (131 words)
Progress
Also, please count your word total. You should be at 1465 words or more.
Arsenal
Monday, April 18, 2011
Typing 1: First classes
Why I Like Typing
Parties
Sunday, April 10, 2011
Missing word targets
Maybe you get sick one week, or you become very busy with other study, or your part-time job. In these circumstances, it is possible that you will fall behind the word target that week. Is there a penalty in this case?
The answer is "No", as long as you meet the target the following week. By the week after that, you should try to catch up with the schedule.
The best way to avoid problems with the targets is to write more than the target in the early weeks! Then, if you miss the weekly target one week, you will still be able to keep up with the schedule.
(107/365)
Word Targets
In this class, the most important thing is writing fluency. Therefore, we have a target for the semester of 10,000 words.
To help you reach this goal, we have weekly targets, too. Since there are about 12 weeks between the first class and the last class, we divide 10,000 words by 12 to get 835 words as the basic weekly target.
However, at the beginning of the course, some of you may not be accustomed to writing lots of English, so the target for the first two weeks is only one half of that (420 words), and the target for the 3rd week is 0.75 (625 words) of the basic weekly target.
By the 4th week, you will have become accustomed to writing regularly in English, so the target for the 4th, 5th, and 6th weeks is the basic weekly target of 835 words.
After a few weeks of writing 835 words, you will be ready to increase your pace, so the target for the 7th, 8th, 9th, 10th, and 11th weeks is 1.25 times the basic weekly target, i.e. 1050 words. In the final week, you will probably be busy with other things, so the target goes back to the basic weekly target of 835 words.
203 words
Total: 258
Welcome to Writing Ⅲ
Hi, everyone, and welcome to Writing Ⅲ. This course is designed to help you develop confidence in writing and improve your writing, especially your writing fluency. We'll use blogs for the course. I think the course will be challenging, but I think it will also be a lot of fun. Let's enjoy writing in English! (55 words)








